Lead me to my destiny through the valley of death
Where shadows follow me to my very last breath
When I’m on my knees crying begging for mercy
Don’t take no pity just be my enemy
As you punish me for all my sins
There are no losers, just wins, wins and wins.
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Did you write the poem, Sweetie?
Michael
Yes I did in about 2 minutes flat when I’d just woken up… 🙂
Awesome.! P.S. Facebook wants to allow 11 year-olds, now.!
I guess ones the sins are taken care of .. one becomes pure again ..
beautiful poem
Once*
Bikram ji Sometimes life just brings you to your knees where you just need to feel something… Usually anything.
This almost started out like the Bible scriptures psalms 23! You are a good writer!
It is indeed… My poetry writing has a habit of taking on a life of its own.
Thanks for the compliment serenity 😉
beautiful
😉
Seems like a desire to be punished. The whole sin thing for me is hard to understand. The OT stresses judgement for wickedness and punishment . The NT seems less harsh with the threats. More emphasis on confession, regret and atonement and the attempt to be guided by the Spirit to live in sin no longer.
It really depends what you define as sin… And how you were brought up…
Also crimes/sins and punishments are all around us… We are from day one taught to be good or else…
On the day of judgement I know how it shall be.
I’ll stand before my God with no hope of charity.
I’ll stand alone and pay the price for everything I’ve done.
‘Cos there ain’t no Guardian Angel for a child of Babylon…
You are a genius 😉
Hope there is charity for everyone 😉
Reblogged this on YOU DECIDE.
Thanks
Yes to the wins, but this seems dark.
Sometimes things feel dark…
Be your own saviour, Why must we need to know everything, be in control of everything…
Let Allah’s, Lord, God, (Almighty), Plan unfold… do you fail to trust that He is al Hakeem ♥
Zahir 🙂
No ones asking to know anything… When you delve into the abyss of intellectuality you will see its inner thoughts and feelings that sometimes require a voice a source a communication.
Have a Faith………………..:)
Did you write that? You have a wonderful way with words…..a gift! Blessings!
Hey thanks for the compliment… Yes I did write it for my Facebook status and ended up blogging it here. 😉
The phrase “valley of death” conjures up images of Lord Tennyson’s “Charge of the Light Brigade”. Your poem seems to imbue the words with a very different meaning. Captivating all the same.
Good one
I think this flash poetry is something
that you should do a lot more of Princess 🙂
Sooo, you just woke up and wrote this one
well you have the makings of a ghoulishly
fine poet, so keep adding whatever springs
to mind or else? 🙂 lol
Have fun today Princess 😉
Androgoth XXx
As always I visit and am pleasantly surprised!
Your poem makes me call to mind the scripture in Proverbs 16:24 …
“Pleasant words are as an honeycomb, sweet to the soul, and health to the bones.”
have a good week Princess!
now that one I liked
Hmm.. im not sure if one would like to be punished.. but then, who knows what this heart finds satisfaction in…
My advice, never ask for punishment. Ask for guidence n Mercy.
and now Hiyaa! : ) been long haan. I think I owe u an award I promised long ago. Remember me?